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Editing Services

Submission Package £99

The Submission package consists of feedback on your synopsis, query letter and first three chapters (or 10k words, whichever is shorter). Similar to the Development Edit, you will receive feedback on:

  • Market

  • Age range and word count

  • Structure and plot

  • Characters

  • Pacing

  • Voice or narrative

  • Dialogue

  • World building and setting

  • A summary and suggested next steps

Development Edit starting at £200

A development edit includes a read through of the full text to produce a report which identifies areas of strength and weakness. Some areas will inevitably need more work than others, but you can expect feedback on the following categories:

  • Overall thoughts

  • Market

  • Age range and word count

  • Structure and plot

  • Characters

  • Pacing

  • Voice or narrative

  • Dialogue

  • World building and setting

  • A summary and suggested next steps

Pricing

Development Edit pricing is dependent on word count

I aim to return both Submission Packages and Development Edits within two weeks.

For ongoing editorial help, please contact me via Write Mentor

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